Prologue

Kell · Post by **Kell** » Tue Oct 10, 2006 11:35 pm

Yaaay, more ;p

Good stuff.. I'm going to like seeing him develope, he'll be grande.

IronWaffle · Post by **IronWaffle** » Wed Oct 11, 2006 3:35 pm

Nice read! Grayle's going to be epic!

Roser · Post by **Roser** » Tue Oct 17, 2006 8:37 am

A good read. Very intriguing

superpoweredchimp · Post by **superpoweredchimp** » Sat Oct 28, 2006 3:59 am

I finally got around to reading it. Very good stuff. Especially liked that last bit in the ending.

Tslisher · Post by **Tslisher** » Mon Oct 30, 2006 5:57 pm

Simply excellent - you can feel the dank, dark of the prisons and the emotions of the young man. A wonderful start!

muletang · Post by **muletang** » Mon Oct 30, 2006 8:01 pm

lookin forward to seein how he works out

Wingnut · Post by **Wingnut** » Mon Oct 30, 2006 9:25 pm

Egads! Humans find the worst places to get their education! Might I suggest a roomier, cleaner more well lit place for your Higher Education? You may also wish to find a... YOUNGER teacher..

((Great story! I truely enjoyed it.))

Grayle · Post by **Grayle** » Sat Nov 11, 2006 5:14 am

Thank you to everyone for your kind words. Sincerely, I'm humbled.