Dasaria II - A NWN2 Roleplay and Story-driven Persistent World

I like it.
The only thing I would dare to suggest changing would be to replace "succubus" with "incubus", a male daemon of the same...shall we say "trade"? Unless the choice of words was intentional, of course. This opinion is based on the IRL lore on daemons.

Typo in Katia's dialog in Morell:

"Are you looking for some fun perhaps? Than look no further!"

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You would never see a CE or LE in the same group with a LG. At least in mho. There would be too much conflict for the group to even work. On another note, if this PW premotes role playing then 1 those groups shouldnt be allowed to exist and 2 if they do, there should be some penalty.

I must say I ...

OOC: I like it. You draw an interesting picture of the protagonist as well as her family. Also this makes a good (although painful) comparison to my own scribbles, as reading this I notice a whole bunch of things I might have done differently. :)

To make an attempt at constructive criticism, I ...

Nell leaned forward over the table and watched closely as Manders did adjustments to his new armor. He was wearing the outfit of a woodsman.

“Heh, haven’t worn one of these since I left home.” he said and smiled at his own reflection in the mirror.

“I’m glad it fits. Now try again.”

“Aight.” He ...

In the transition "tip box" that tells lore-like stuff, there is an error in the wyvernsden address.

There are two overlapping doors in the same doorway on the second floor of Buck Inn.



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I was fighting a creature, fire mephit I believe, and had drunk a regenerating potion. For three times in a row, I was struck down (as in going under 0 hp) and then revived by the potion. In the end I killed the mephit, but there was no lightning effect nor would the doctor or the quest giver react ...

One of the opponents in the Arena, Kenta of Rel, appears to be a transvestite. Looks like a woman but talks with a male voice.

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All right, I made myself believe that you actually might want to read more instead of just being nice and supportive with your compliments. I've been close to deleting this for about ten times now, but I guess I'll give it a chance. :p ...

It always creates confusion when the spesific date is not mentioned, as for Reno for example, the posting date is today the 16th.

Thanks guys. :)
Funny thing that while writing this, I had my character in there at the second floor of Ravencrest so that I could take a look at how it all looked like. DM Asylum then apparently went by and spawned a hostile rogue there at the top of the stairs while I was writing. You can imagine ...

”Quin?”

There was no reply. She closed the door softly behind her and walked quietly to the bedroom door, peering inside. Everything looked normal with Quin sleeping on their bed with covers pulled up to his chin. A single, nearly burnt out candle cast its light from a nightstand next to him. She ...

In the rattle quest in Aucklorn Mills, when you are finishing the quest and you opt for the "Good" path, by letting her keep the little money, you get 10 good alighnment change.

And NOW you bring this up? I have been trying to get back to true neutral for a long time and now that I've found a way ...