Greytones

ChikenKannon · Post by **ChikenKannon** » Wed Jun 27, 2007 4:11 am

Elrith wrote:
Grayle wrote:Wow!
x 2!

**3!

KoolestLoser · Post by **KoolestLoser** » Wed Jun 27, 2007 4:48 am

That's some amazing stuff you've got there, Grey.

Amazgoodverbeautiful.

Depheant · Post by **Depheant** » Wed Jun 27, 2007 9:40 am

I disagree with what the people said (but that's not a first). I think the pieces you posted previously were much better. Not sure if you spent more time on those, but you seem to have proportion issues with both of these (especially the first one of the woman sitting above the water. Not particularly keen on the Stephen Hawking like pose either, which is why you also have a slight perspective issue.

The lighting in your first of the two new pieces isn't consistent either (unlike the previous works you showed), you seem to have the main lightsource somewhere in the North West, but there's light coming from the East in some places. Or at least it looks that way, which could be from the prespective issue I mentioned earlier.

The portrait suffers from the same proportion issues as the first one, although they eyes are spaced well, they seem to be too close together, and that's because the face is a bit too wide. The nose bridge is a bit too pronounced and probably the one thing that takes away from the realism of the piece - I know she's meant to be an elf, but they were supposed to be beautiful, not disfigured.

Her eyes don't seem to point in the same direction as well; she's looking to her right and up, but if you look closely it appears like she's a bit crosseyed.

Keep drawing, practice makes perfect. : )

Kell · Post by **Kell** » Wed Jun 27, 2007 12:10 pm

Depheant wrote: Her eyes don't seem to point in the same direction as well; she's looking to her right and up, but if you look closely it appears like she's a bit crosseyed.

That's what eyes look like when they look up to something close, hanging somewhat above them. I don't think that's an error, to be honest. The closer the target, the more crosseyed eyes may seem.

Greyshore · Post by **Greyshore** » Wed Jun 27, 2007 12:27 pm

I think it's actually because the eyes aren't identical. ^^; I'll be correcting these or maybe even draw again a new set of drawings featuring Pylia. And maybe, just maybe I'll colour them. It'll be a glorious battle against photoshop.

Depheant wrote:Keep drawing, practice makes perfect. : )

I will, Deph.

Thanks for pointing out the errors, it'll help to not repeat them a second time. And thanks for all the compliments too, everyone.

Redleafe · Post by **Redleafe** » Mon Jul 09, 2007 8:43 pm

Yeah Greyshore, This is a very pleasant collection of art to the community. I have always been a fan of Black,White, And Grey.

Very talented my friend, Very.

Evelond Formos · Post by **Evelond Formos** » Sun Jul 15, 2007 4:01 am

Greyshore, I have nothing more to say than your artwork is awesome. The details have already been covered.

Keep drawing, it certainly is a pleasure to view your pieces.

The Explorer · Post by **The Explorer** » Sun Jul 15, 2007 10:00 am

Wow I can't beleive I only just found this thread, I meant WOW those are captivating drawings Greyshore.

Redleafe · Post by **Redleafe** » Sun Jul 15, 2007 9:27 pm

I find myself coming across new surprises almost on the regular here on the forums, especially since I've been away from game for a few months now. The Tales section is the ultimate treasure trove of surprises though.

Greyshore · Post by **Greyshore** » Tue Oct 23, 2007 10:09 pm

Some new sketches.

Minuvas Piotus

Latishe Vaine

Noa Longbane

Aswaith Ravenash

ChikenKannon · Post by **ChikenKannon** » Tue Oct 23, 2007 10:24 pm

Top of Jaw
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Bottom of Jaw
Floor

KoolestLoser · Post by **KoolestLoser** » Tue Oct 23, 2007 10:41 pm

Suhweeeeeeeeeeet!

Kell · Post by **Kell** » Tue Oct 23, 2007 10:50 pm

Absolutely badass.. I'm flattered. Thank you so much.

Evelond Formos · Post by **Evelond Formos** » Tue Oct 23, 2007 10:52 pm

KoolestLoser wrote:Suhweeeeeeeeeeet!

LONOmakesWAR · Post by **LONOmakesWAR** » Tue Oct 23, 2007 11:29 pm

Minuvas' expression is flippin PERFECT lol